So I sent the boys out... they haven't come back yet, but I was in a steep discussion with Wendi and talked about tension in the story. IMHO there is lots of tension in the story, but Wendi had a point. She mentioned that there were places to add a bit more. So....I'm game. I'm adding and then going to send to another CP.
I want to get back to my vampire, but a character in Permanent keeps showing up. Dunno what I'll do with him, but he's making himself known. Anderson, I'll think about it.
Tomorrow I'm at the Menagerie. Come join me!